scene 5
INT. PORSCHE CAYENNE - DAY
JOHN and JAN, both mid-70s, in the front seat, John driving. Barbara, 50-ish and Chloe, 17, in back, entering Moss Landing, California, heading north on Highway 1.
John in polo shirt, khaki slacks. Left hand on the wheel shows his gold watch and marriage band. He is tan and fit. As is Jan in Martha Stewart casual. Her silver hair styled short enough to show the silver earrings that complement her necklace, bracelet and wedding ring. Her left hand is over her right on the purse in her lap.
Barbara in jeans, running shows, PARK CITY long-sleeve tee, fashionable sunglasses propped on her head. Fashionable saddle-like bag at her feet. She is fit enough to suggest athlete. As is Chloe in track suit, running shoes, long hair in a tail under ballcap with SLO embroidered above the bill. Phone in her hands.
JAN: So what do we know about Jackie?
CHLOE: History professor at New Mexico State. Undergrad U-N-M, Masters University of Washington, Doctorate at Claremont.
JOHN: Nice pedigree.
BARBARA: And beautiful per her department photograph.
JAN: I'll have to take a look.
JOHN: Do we know how she has access to horses and you'll be riding?
CHLOE: She has a cousin who manages one of the stables in the area, the area being northwest of Ruidoso.
JAN: isn't that were the Millers retired?
JOHN: Cloudcroft.
JAN: That's it.
JOHN: Junior just made partner at Sawyer Buford.
JAN: How do we know that?
JOHN: Mike Davis called about a word on Darlene Dunlap who's being considered for Of Counsel. I took a look at their website and there he was, even more of a dead ringer for senior.
JAN: Have we heard anything more about Hunter's screenplay negotiations?
CHLOE: Yes. He has a conference call with his agent and two Hollywood suits Thursday. I'll keep you posted. By the way and speaking of Cloudcroft, I think he's trending toward a move in that direction.
BARBARA: Really?
CHLOE: He's noticing more traffic around his house, people pulling, lingering, finally moving on.
JOHN: Goodbye comfortable anonymity.
JAN: Wait until Foglost becomes a bestseller.
BARBARA: So Cloudcroft.
CHLOE: East of there, closer to a town called Mayhill. Buying land and building a cabin.
BARBARA: His dream come true.
CHLOE: Early stages, nothing certain. He met a realtor when he was in Taos last week, seed planted.
JAN/JOHN: Good for Hunter.
Chloe picks up when her PHONE RINGTONES (TBD).
CHLOE: Are your ears ringing?
Talking about yourgoing Hollyweird and buying and building big in the hills.
I added that caveat.
Rolling into Tres Pinos, about to coffee up at Tumbleweed. What's up?
INT. NOVELIST'S HOME OFFICE -DAY
HUNTER, 50ish, hiking shoes, jeans, unbuttoned and untucked long-sleeve over tee, phone to ear where sits in the swivel chair at the old wooden desk aimed at the big window up-close view of the Organ Mountains east of Las Cruces, New Mexico.
If the window is the front of the room, the desk is at the back, near open door to hall. TBD on the hat rack near the door. Whiteboard on the wall behind the desk, markers in tray. Printer on stand next to desk.
Loaded bookshelf against wall to left of desk faces framed print of Ad Reinhardt Red Painting on wall to right of desk, above old leather sofa. Navajo rug on hardwood. Stool and telescope in one corner near window, wooden Great Horned Owl on cactus sculpture in the other.
The laptop on the desk is open to a text file we cannot discern other than "WAKPA" in bold in the top left corner of the page. A baseball is the paper weight atop a short stack of yellow legal pads near a coffee mug filled with pens, pencils, letter opener and yellow highlight marker. Other items on the desk include a globe, hardcover copy of Joseph Heller's novel Something Happened, and two framed photographs of Chloe.
In one she is seven years old, looking back at the camera through the binoculars she has made of her hands and fingers. CHLOE in red across the front of her pink tee. In the other she, 12, and Hunter are, in the front seats of a roller coaster we see from track behind them is nearing the end of a steep descent. Their faces express their exhilaration.
HUNTER: What's up is I see your Phoenix flight is delayed.
Okay. Just making sure.
About to get a workout in.
K. Tell everyone hi.
Love you too, baby. See ya soon.
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As soon as he pockets phone, the text on the laptop gives way to screensaver that is a photograph of Chloe present age, flashing a peace sign at the camera from where is crouched on a surfboard, "tubed" in the wave she is riding, wearing a pink wetsuit, hair in a tail. The scenery in the background shows bluff meeting beach. He stares at the image awhile before powering down the laptop, leaves into hallway, his SHOES SQUEAKING on hardwood replaced by:
RUMBLING AND CLICKETY-CLACK OF TRAIN BOXCARS.ROLLING.