Thursday, March 19, 2026

scene 25

scene 24

EXT. CAFE PATIO - DAY  

MURMUR OF PATRONS at tables and JOHN COLTRANE THROUGH SPEAKERS.

Jan and John at their tables with a view to train and tracks at Paso Robles depot remnants of their waffles and eggs benedict brunch on plates near a pitcher of ice water. Mimosas in champagne flutes. They stare at the San Augustin Pass photo on Jan's phone. John's on table. 

VOICE ON LOUDSPEAKER:  This is to inform passengers waiting for the delayed southbound Coast Starlight that your train is scheduled to arrive in twenty minutes, at two-thirty. Again, the southbound Coast Starlight is scheduled to arrive at two-thirty. We apologize for the delay and thank you for your patience.

John and Jan are so focused on the image they don't notice their 20-something WAITRESS, PAIGE by her name tag, arrive behind them and look over their shoulders at the picture. 

PAIGE: What a great picture.

Startled, John and Jan turn to her.

PAIGE (CONT.): I'm so sorry.

JOHN: Paige, could you please wear a bell?

He winks, Paige smiles. 

JAN: We were a little locked in.

PAIGE: Who's with her and where are they, to be really nosey. 

JOHN: That's her father, his father's girlfriend, and a someone her father knows, somewhere between Las Cruces and Ruidoso, New Mexico. 

PAIGE: Finally a face for dad. Who, by the way, looks a lot like the writer of the book my uncle is reading. Fog something, I think.

JOHN: Foglost?

PAIGE: That's it. By H-C something or other.

JAN: Hardyn with a Y?

PAIGE: Yes! Don't tell me that's Chloe's dad.

JOHN/JAN: We won't.  

PAIGE: Can I tell my uncle?

Jan and John nod.

PAIGE (CONT.): Can I refill your mimosas

John and Jan look at each other, then at Paige, nod. Paige leaves into cafe. John and Jan finish their mimosas. return their attention to the picture.

JAN: They both lean on their left leg.

JOHN: Yep. 

JAN: Jackie is beautiful. Isn't she?

JOHN: She is. 

JAN: Did you look into the Spider blog Chloe mentioned?

JOHN: Cursory glance. Hers is red.

JAN: Like Benjamin Braddock's.

John smiles.

JOHN: Let's watch that tonight.

JAN: You have a date on your hands, mister.

JOHN: Promise?

JAN: You just show up.

JOHN: I'll be there.

JAN: Do you think we'll get a picture not forwarded by Barb?

Both their PHONES RINGTONE TBD. They look at each other. John gets phone looks at what Jan opens to: a selfie Chloe has taken with Tom in the back seats of the Rover. Tom's window frames the dunes of White Sands National Park

JAN: Barbara meets Brian, Kate meets Cedric, Tom Walker arrives on the scene. Within a month-and-a-half.

JOHN: Enough to keep you on your toes.

JAN: I'm on mine. 

They pocket phones when Paige arrives with fresh mimosas. 

PAIGE: Round two.

She sets them on table.

JOHN/JAN: Thank you, Paige.

JOHN: How's the band thing going?

PAIGE: The band thing's going okay. We're closing the concerts in the park Thursday night.

John and Jan, look at each other, shrug and nod.

JOHN: Paige, we're going to treat that like an invitation and accept it.

PAIGE: Really? That would be so cool.

SAME VOICE OVER LOUDSPEAKER: Attention Amtrak travelers waiting for the southbound Coast Starlight.

(Paige waves, leaves.)

Your train will be arriving in ten minutes so you might want to begin making your way to the platform. 

(John and Jan sip, return their attention to the Chloe with Tom selfie, hold hands.)

Once again, southbound Coast Starlight will be here in ten minutes.

SO G OF LESSER GOLDFINCH.


scene 24

scene 23

EXT. DECK - CABIN IN THE WOODS - DAY

KATE and CEDRIC, 70-somethings, at repose in their respective chaises, their phones and bottled waters on the table between them. Kate in running shoes, jeans, unbuttoned denim blouse over tee, sleeves rolled to elbows, silver watch. We can't see what on her laptop has her attention. Cedric is reading Foglost. Tan work boots, new jeans, untucked long-sleeve, gold watch. 

Cabin surrounded by lodgepole pines. The chaises share the deck with a grill and fire pit near where the deck meets a small meadow. View through big window behind them to room with fireplace and TWO CATS looking out from different levels of cat tree.  Intermittent SONG OF WILSON'S WARBLER.

CEDRIC: Do you know if Hunter does or did drink?

KATE: I know that he did. Last I heard he's been clean and sober for a few years. He looked great when I saw him in at Jan's birthday. Like he works out. Why do you ask, unless it gives too much away.

CEDRIC: Well, the protagonist drinks. And Hunter writes about it in such a way that only personal experience can inform. He's poetically poignant. When will I meet him?

KATE: Well, at Chloe's graduation for sure, and I'd bet Chloe's birthday. Both of which we need to talk about as far as where to stay.

CEDRIC: I'm not tired of Pismo.

KATE: It's Pismo. Same or something different.

CEDRIC: Same works for me.

KATE: Settled. Doh.

CEDRIC: A deer.

KATE: I just remembered Chloe's at Hunter's now. They're going on a road trip on a rental motorcycle.

CEDRIC: Eighteenth birthday.

KATE: Yes. 

CEDRIC: Do we know what we're getting her?

Kate smiles.

KATE: Your first do we know.

CEDRIC: Been saving it for the right occasion.

KATE: We do not, yet.

CEDRIC: John and Jan?

KATE: They, Hunter and Barbara are talking about a car.

Kate's PHONE RINGTONES MAN'S VOICE CALLING "FORE!" 

KATE (CONT.): John's new ringtone.

Cedric chuckles, Kate picks up. Cedric turns page.

KATE: We were just talking about Chloe's birthday after I just remembered she's at Hunter's.

(Her face expresses her surprise.)

I'm here.

(Cedric looks at her.)

Well what a turn. Do we have a middle name?

Do we have as picture?

Can't wait.

I'll be here.

(She sets down phone.)

CEDRIC: Picture of what and whose middle name?

KATE: Do you remember the cowboy in Hunter's short story Honda Knot.

CEDRIC. Vividly. Loyd Landers.

KATE: Loyd Landers is based on Hunter's father. Thomas Travis Walker. Whom, as you might recall, Hunter has never heard from. 

CEDRIC: I do.

KATE: He's a retired ranch foreman who lives with his wife in Laramie.

CEDRIC: Which is new information?

KATE: Yes. He showed up at Hunter's yesterday. I should be getting a picture any - there it is. The woman is Hunter's new girlfriend.

(She stares, hands laptop to Cedric, who stares at the San Augustin Pass selfie Wanda showed Daisy.)

CEDRIC: I'll tell ya, Kate. Thomas Travis Walker looks a helluva lot like a Tom I met at a funeral in Casper a couple years ago.

KATE: Who was the deceased to you?

CEDRIC: Frank Baxter. We were in First Infantry together. 

KATE: And Tom looks like someone you met at his funeral.

CEDRIC: Damn near a doppelganger.

KATE: You spoke?

CEDRIC: Briefly, over a beer. First Cav. He'd been in boot camp with Frank. Both from Texas.

KATE: Tom Walker is from Texas, though we don't where. Yet. He has a sister who also maintains an ancestry site.

CEDRIC: Well how about that. 

KATE: How about it.

He hands back laptop. 

CEDRIC (CONT.): I may pause here and re-read Honda Knot. Any chance Hunter was conceived in a Carson City. 

KATE: Carson is his middle name.

CEDRIC: And I was about to ask.

CAR HORN HONK. Tom marks page, sets book on table, picks up phone. Kate closes laptop, gets phone. They walk to and through gate out of view.