Thursday, March 12, 2026

scene 21

scene 20

EXT HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Chloe, Tom around the table, remnants of dinner on plates pushed to center. Pitcher of ice water and their glasses half-empty. Tom's hat hangs from empty chair's shoulder.

THUNDER, LIGHT RAIN, BREEZE strong enough to jostle the umbrella over the table, THROUGHOUT. Moon obscured by clouds.

CHLOE: Does Laramie get summer monsoons?

TOM: We do, but not like down here. Nothin' like what I got in Albuquerque last night.

CHLOE: Are you and Wanda going to miss your balmy winters?

Tom smiles.

TOM: No we will not.

CHLOE: How cold does it get?

TOM: I'd round off average winter lows to ten to twenty, but plenty enough days it'll be that below zero. Add wind and it'll keep ya inside.

CHLOE: And you'll have your cool and breezy Texas summers.

Tom smiles again.

TOM: Hundred two on Ruthie's porch thermometer. 

CHLOE: But at least it's a dry heat.

TOM: I got a feelin' you know it ain't. 

CHLOE: Only rumor. Sticky?

TOM: Stickier than pine tar pants.

Chloe smiles.

HUNTER: So Tom what are you looking for in Kerrville? Any prerequisites?

TOM: Well, brick for starters. We'd like that. Four bedrooms, one for guests, another as a home office. Single level 'cause ain't none of us lookin' to be goin' up and down stairs. And while it ain't a prerequisite, I'd like it if we could find a place with enough property that I could have a horse who might need a good home.

CHLOE: Like a rescue.

TOM: Somethin' like that. Got a friend runs a program outta Bandera, where me and Ruth grew up, by the way. I'll be talkin' to her when I'm there.

CHLOE: That's cool.

TOM: So folks, I hate to be a party-pooper but much as I'd like to stay up and keep this conversation goin', it's a little past our bedtime and my wife and sister are both waitin' for my phone call, so I hope you'll excuse me.

HUNTER: To be continued.

TOM: I'd sure like that.

CHLOE: Me too.

Tom puts on hat, stands, pushes chair in.

TOM: Chloe, that was a delicious casserole.

CHLOE: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.

TOM: Any chance I could get the recipe from ya before I leave?

Chloe nods.

HUNTER: I'm right here at sunrise with coffee, Tom, in case you're up early.

TOM: I will be and I'll see ya then. Goodnight, y'all.

He tips his hat.

HUNTER/CHLOE: Goodnight, Tom. 

Hunter and Chloe watch Tom walk away, enter kitchen, leave view.

CHLOE: Dad?

HUNTER: Daughter.

CHLOE: If.

HUNTER: If.

CHLOE: If Tom were able and wants to, and Jackie could wrangle another horse.

HUNTER: Mind reader.

Hunter gets phone from pocket, speaks into it.

HUNTER (CONT.) Jackie.


[END Act 1


[CUT TO. 22: 

HUNTER'S DRIVEWAY - NEXT DAY]