Other titles: After Completion, Already Completed, Settled, Mission Accomplished, Tasks Completed, After the End, A state of Climax
Monday, April 6, 2026
silly interlude re restructure,. re-revisited
Hilary Barrett:
"You have committed yourself and made a transition. Even if the change so far is internal, a resolve formed or decision made, there is a sense in which everything is in place. Now you create success in small ways and in small things: you attend to details, working with what you've already decided or achieved."
revised beats 21-30
21. Next day. About the truck, Heere's Jackie, intros, re cousin's partner another surprise guest. The more the merrier. Re pictures and Chloe's selfie-stick. Intro Rover and away.
22. Wanda with Daisy gets group picture from San Augustin Pass, recognized by Daisy, having stopped there with Clem.
23. Ruth at home saves picture as screensaver.
24. John and Jan stare at picture, re John's Roy Rogers Christmas boots.
25. Kate shows picture to Cedric, who thinks he's met Tom before.
26. Barbara places picture, framed, on Chloe's desk.
27. Int. Rover, last time on a horse. San Diego, USMC.
28. Maria knock knock Izzy. Gil re Tom's Las Cruces layover.
29. Sess and Claire.Rover arrive, intros and rodeo. Re tie-down ropin' and calves being branded.
Into barn. Woodpecker.
30. Claire's dad at home (edit) reading Foglost, gets Claire's selfie with Hunter.. "Holy shit" draws Claire's mom in. "Well shit howdy."
revised beats 11-20
11. Barbara with John and Jan gets Hunter's call re Tom Walker. John re a middle name. Check. A picture.
12. Wanda with Daisy gets Tom's call from Hunter's guest room. Wanda hands key to Daisy.
13. Tom calls Ruth at Fredericksburg peach stand.
14. Gil with Boys gets Tom selfie. Hijole.
15. Chloe and Hunter El Paso airport. Chloe re Doc. Buckle up.
16. Barbara with Brian tells him about Tom and Olivia. Brian re Tom showing up in conjunction with release of Foglost.
17. Hunter, Chloe arrive, truck in driveway, intros, Chloe to kitchen, Hunter's questions. Chloe takes picture.
18. Kate with Cedric (reading Foglost) gets John's call. Retired cattle ranch foreman in Laramie.
19. Jan and John at home, sunset, looking at street view of Tom's/Wanda's house. Patches of snow.
20. Patio night, Tom re anniversary, Hawaii, surfing lesson, having met Wanda at AA meeting in Boise., excuses self, Hunter calls Jackie.
revised beats 1-10
1. Tom and Wanda, night, Hawaii and Foglost.
2. Next day, sunrise. Tom leaves in truck. Re Daisy and Maria/Boys.
3. Gil, Maria, Great Room, The Boys, Knock Knock Ida re Tom. Tomorrow. Just Tom. Re Foglost.
4. Tom arrive ABQ motel. Monsoon clouds. Call Ruth/Sis, start bath.
5. Next day, sunrise. Wanda gets call from Tom - meet ringtone - in truck, ABQ motel lot. He drives away.
6. John, Jan, Barbara and Chloe, roadside cafe. Re Jackie, Horse Day, motorcycle ride/helmet.
7. Hunter, home office, Chloe photos. Time to go.
8. Tom in truck, nearing Hunter's house, aviator sunglasses. Recycle/trash bins at each curb. Stops, idles, raises phone to take picture. Garage door opens automatically to reveal Rover, motorcycle and Hunter with filled bag in hand. He looks up at Tom, Tom takes picture, drives away. Hunter watches truck disappear behind neighbors' house.
9. Tom's U-turn.
10. Hunter foyer, doorbell. Howdy Tom Walker. Into house.
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